Comments for The view from my garret http://www.clairemarriott.com Writing, reading, gardening, making and muttering Wed, 22 Feb 2012 20:31:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on First campaign challenge by Kevin Hiatt http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-484 Kevin Hiatt Wed, 22 Feb 2012 20:31:39 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-484 I love that you use a cell and a prisoner.. course originally that's where my own was headed, but you never know where your character is going to take you. Very good use of descriptive language. I love that you use a cell and a prisoner.. course originally that’s where my own was headed, but you never know where your character is going to take you. Very good use of descriptive language.

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Claire http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-483 Claire Wed, 22 Feb 2012 11:59:21 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-483 Thanks for your lovely comments, so encouraging to read them. Thanks for your lovely comments, so encouraging to read them.

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by bridgetstraub.com http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-482 bridgetstraub.com Wed, 22 Feb 2012 05:26:29 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-482 Very well done. Very well done.

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Ashley Nixon http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-481 Ashley Nixon Wed, 22 Feb 2012 02:04:39 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-481 "At this time of year the cell sucked in half an hour of daylight and, if he stood on the edge of the bed, he could sniff autumnal decay in the leaf-laden air." ---This was amazing. In this sentence, you gave me a sense of imprisonment, and the yearning for life beyond it. Great job! “At this time of year the cell sucked in half an hour of daylight and, if he stood on the edge of the bed, he could sniff autumnal decay in the leaf-laden air.” —This was amazing. In this sentence, you gave me a sense of imprisonment, and the yearning for life beyond it. Great job!

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Alexia Chamberlynn http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-480 Alexia Chamberlynn Wed, 22 Feb 2012 01:26:56 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-480 Nice writing! Your descriptions and flow are great. Nice writing! Your descriptions and flow are great.

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Liza http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-479 Liza Tue, 21 Feb 2012 22:43:58 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-479 Well done...intense, emotional, and unexpected. This is a really creative take on the prompts. I'm number 112. Well done…intense, emotional, and unexpected. This is a really creative take on the prompts. I’m number 112.

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Alyssa McKendry http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-478 Alyssa McKendry Tue, 21 Feb 2012 15:57:41 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-478 I really like this! You had really good descriptive language! Nice job :) I'm #37 I really like this! You had really good descriptive language! Nice job :)

I’m #37

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Claire http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-477 Claire Tue, 21 Feb 2012 07:55:29 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-477 Thanks folks. They do actually give death row inmates a medical to make sure they are well enough to be executed. Perverse isn't it! Thanks folks. They do actually give death row inmates a medical to make sure they are well enough to be executed. Perverse isn’t it!

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Ann Cory http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-476 Ann Cory Tue, 21 Feb 2012 07:27:40 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-476 Edgy and somber - well done! Edgy and somber – well done!

]]> Comment on First campaign challenge by Carrie Butler http://www.clairemarriott.com/2012/02/20/first-campaign-challenge/#comment-475 Carrie Butler Tue, 21 Feb 2012 00:20:45 +0000 http://www.clairemarriott.com/?p=431#comment-475 I love it! You have my vote. :) I love it! You have my vote. :)

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